Hi
I completed this weeks reading by using some really helpful feedback I got from my group, We made teams room we can review each other's work and give useful feedback to each, I made quite a lot of chances to my four paragraphs on things like the structure of the paragraphs, making them to make more sense by thinking about what each sense was covering.
I really appreciated the feedback I got from Shaun as well as the feedback I got from y group and reflected on my work, I tried to improve it the best I could and it has drastically improved by I think there is still room for space for this to be anywhere perfect.
My work
-Abdi
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